فاطمة البناء
28-01-2006, 08:52 PM
سلامي للجميع......
اقدم لكم بعض الرايتينجز الي كتبناها الفصل الي راح لمقرر 105 ... كتبتها مع الجروب مالتي .... (انجيلز جروب)
for and against
Nobody can deny that every thing has two sides one is dark and other is bright that can be applied on camping.
To begin with, camping has many advantages. First of all, people can have fun and enjoy their time with there families. Also, we can meet new people and make new friendships. Moreover, when we go camping, we can change or life style.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages for camping. Such as, people be far away from the modern life falsities like mobile, computer and T.V. In addition, there are many accidents could happen while camping such as being bitten by dangerous animals. Moreover, the weather could change suddenly, so it can rain or the wind can even blow the tents.
At last, I think that camping give people chances to gain experience like living with different ways and using simple equipment to do our activities.
Owning a mobile phone
Nowadays everyone has a mobile phone, but not everyone knows how to use it. However, owning a mobile phone has two sides, one is bright and the other is dark.
To begin with, owning a mobile phone has some advantages. A mobile can be used for emergency cases. Also we can find the person we want at anytime and anywhere by pressing a button. Therefore, businessmen use it to contact with each other for making deals. Moreover, it is light and portable, so we can carry it where ever we go.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages such as, it can affect hearing if we use it for many hours. Beside this, it can cause accidents or sometimes lead to death if we use it while we are driving. In addition, every month a new model released, so people rush to buy it. As a result of that, we have to buy credits which it can cost a lot of money.
At last but not least, some people like owning a mobile phone, others do not. Anyway, everybody has his own point of view witch should be respected.
3complaning about a laptop
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about a laptop I bought from your store last week. I tried the laptop for flows and checked how it worked. When I got to the casher, however, the assistant got me a packaged one and assured me it was perfect.
I was very happy about buying the laptop. When I came back to Bahrain, I discovered that the screen was scratched. As well your will understand I was extremely upset when this happened. Moreover, I only bought from your store because of your reputation for perfect quality.
I enclose the laptop with this letter and looking forward to receiving an apology and full refund of the cost B.D580 of replacement for the laptop.
I trust you will pay this letter your full attention and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
.............
complaining about a service
Dear sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the service I had in your hotel last week (17th Sep), when I arrived to Silverstone to participate on the Formula 1 race.
To begin with, I was very disappointed when I entered the bus which will take us to your hotel. It was not air-conditioned and there were no enough seats, so we had to stand up. After we arrived, the first thing I noticed was that the hotel staff were careless about customers, therefore, we had to carry our bags up to our rooms. I was extremely surprised when I saw my room which was dirty and gloomy.
Even the food was not cocked well. It was not even fresh, as well as the drinks. You can notice, I was completely upset about this. Besides this, the room service was so much bad more than anybody can imagine. That I had to ask for food 5 times before it was finally ready and many kinds of food which I ordered were not available.
More over, the bathroom was tragic. There was no hot water in the shower and there was no shampoo or even soap. The biggest problem in your hotel is that you are don’t cleanness. I have suffered enough because of the insects that scatter in your hotel.
I demand, therefore, a full refund of the cost together with an appropriate apology for the inconvenience I had went through.
I trust you will pay this letter your full attention.
I look forward to receiving a satisfaction replay from you.
Amy Jones
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I saw your advertisement in the news paper and I am very interested in working at the summer camps as a volunteer.
The summer holyday has begun and I do not have any exciting activity to do, so I decided to join your summer camps because I like to keep our environmental clean and healthy. Also I like adventures as well as I like dealing with young people and having fun.
I am 16 years old. I am fit and healthy. Although I have no experience in camping, I have read some books about camping life. In addition, I can do a lot of work like cooking, fishing and sitting up the tents.
Could you please tell me how many days you would want me for? I would also to ask if there will be other students there. What about where I will be sleeping and if you want me to bring any staff with me.
I enclose a photo and some other personal papers about me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Tammy De La Rosa
اتمنى انكم تستفيدون من الرايتنجنز ~57~
اقدم لكم بعض الرايتينجز الي كتبناها الفصل الي راح لمقرر 105 ... كتبتها مع الجروب مالتي .... (انجيلز جروب)
for and against
Nobody can deny that every thing has two sides one is dark and other is bright that can be applied on camping.
To begin with, camping has many advantages. First of all, people can have fun and enjoy their time with there families. Also, we can meet new people and make new friendships. Moreover, when we go camping, we can change or life style.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages for camping. Such as, people be far away from the modern life falsities like mobile, computer and T.V. In addition, there are many accidents could happen while camping such as being bitten by dangerous animals. Moreover, the weather could change suddenly, so it can rain or the wind can even blow the tents.
At last, I think that camping give people chances to gain experience like living with different ways and using simple equipment to do our activities.
Owning a mobile phone
Nowadays everyone has a mobile phone, but not everyone knows how to use it. However, owning a mobile phone has two sides, one is bright and the other is dark.
To begin with, owning a mobile phone has some advantages. A mobile can be used for emergency cases. Also we can find the person we want at anytime and anywhere by pressing a button. Therefore, businessmen use it to contact with each other for making deals. Moreover, it is light and portable, so we can carry it where ever we go.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages such as, it can affect hearing if we use it for many hours. Beside this, it can cause accidents or sometimes lead to death if we use it while we are driving. In addition, every month a new model released, so people rush to buy it. As a result of that, we have to buy credits which it can cost a lot of money.
At last but not least, some people like owning a mobile phone, others do not. Anyway, everybody has his own point of view witch should be respected.
3complaning about a laptop
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about a laptop I bought from your store last week. I tried the laptop for flows and checked how it worked. When I got to the casher, however, the assistant got me a packaged one and assured me it was perfect.
I was very happy about buying the laptop. When I came back to Bahrain, I discovered that the screen was scratched. As well your will understand I was extremely upset when this happened. Moreover, I only bought from your store because of your reputation for perfect quality.
I enclose the laptop with this letter and looking forward to receiving an apology and full refund of the cost B.D580 of replacement for the laptop.
I trust you will pay this letter your full attention and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
.............
complaining about a service
Dear sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the service I had in your hotel last week (17th Sep), when I arrived to Silverstone to participate on the Formula 1 race.
To begin with, I was very disappointed when I entered the bus which will take us to your hotel. It was not air-conditioned and there were no enough seats, so we had to stand up. After we arrived, the first thing I noticed was that the hotel staff were careless about customers, therefore, we had to carry our bags up to our rooms. I was extremely surprised when I saw my room which was dirty and gloomy.
Even the food was not cocked well. It was not even fresh, as well as the drinks. You can notice, I was completely upset about this. Besides this, the room service was so much bad more than anybody can imagine. That I had to ask for food 5 times before it was finally ready and many kinds of food which I ordered were not available.
More over, the bathroom was tragic. There was no hot water in the shower and there was no shampoo or even soap. The biggest problem in your hotel is that you are don’t cleanness. I have suffered enough because of the insects that scatter in your hotel.
I demand, therefore, a full refund of the cost together with an appropriate apology for the inconvenience I had went through.
I trust you will pay this letter your full attention.
I look forward to receiving a satisfaction replay from you.
Amy Jones
advertisement
Dear Sir/Madam,
I saw your advertisement in the news paper and I am very interested in working at the summer camps as a volunteer.
The summer holyday has begun and I do not have any exciting activity to do, so I decided to join your summer camps because I like to keep our environmental clean and healthy. Also I like adventures as well as I like dealing with young people and having fun.
I am 16 years old. I am fit and healthy. Although I have no experience in camping, I have read some books about camping life. In addition, I can do a lot of work like cooking, fishing and sitting up the tents.
Could you please tell me how many days you would want me for? I would also to ask if there will be other students there. What about where I will be sleeping and if you want me to bring any staff with me.
I enclose a photo and some other personal papers about me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Tammy De La Rosa
اتمنى انكم تستفيدون من الرايتنجنز ~57~